Unwelcomed Guests

When Dory’s family planned to buy saplings for their garden, Dory’s immediate suggestions were two fruit-bearing plants – mango tree and pomegranates.

She planted and nurtured them with care, waited for years until they grew enough to give her fruits. She got excited when they started blooming and many little fruits emerged from buds.

But, when they ripened, she didn’t get any to eat. There were unwelcomed guests in groups, whom she loved otherwise.

Dory didn’t even get a chance to show her cute angry face to them – squirrels, birds, and bats.


This is in response to the ‘Weekend Writing Prompt’ by Sammi Cox. The word prompt for this week is ‘Unwelcome’, and the challenge is to limit a piece of prose or poem to exactly 91 words.

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28 Comments Add yours

  1. I nominated you for the Original Outstanding Blogger Award! Here’s the Link . https://capablechloe1.wordpress.com/2020/07/01/the-original-outstanding-blogger-award/

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thanks a lot for this nomination, Chloe. I’m happy to take this up. ❤

      I’ll publish a response post this weekend combining it with one other nomination.

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      1. 😊I cannot wait to read it!

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  2. Wow! I loved this

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you very much, Offshorewriter!

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  3. akshita1776 says:

    Different thought!

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you, Akshita!

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      1. akshita1776 says:

        My pleasure 💐💐

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  4. Harsh says:

    Squirrels!!!
    Beautifully penned!

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    1. Anisha says:

      Yeah, they’re one of my favourites! Thanks, Harsh.

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  5. Simon says:

    Good try and creative ✨✍️

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thanks a lot, Simon!

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  6. Krisha says:

    Really well written….loved reading it 🙂

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    1. Anisha says:

      I’m glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the read, Krisha!

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  7. Haha nice one haa!

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you, Rashmi!

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  8. Great take on the prompt. Anisha! 🙂

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thanks a lot, Shweta! ☺

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  9. HappySoul says:

    Monkeys in my garden ! For the mango and guava .. so relatable .. great take 😊

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    1. Anisha says:

      There’s just one infrequent monkey visitor to my place. Luckily, he doesn’t bring a team. 😅

      Even if lose fruits, it’s good to hear their non-stop sounds around when it’s ripening season. Thanks for the read, Happy Soul!

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Yes definitely 😊cute brats ! 😅

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  10. Nima Mohan says:

    Lovely response to this prompt Anisha 😊😊

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you very much, Nima! ☺

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      1. Nima Mohan says:

        You are welcome Anisha 😊
        See even I bombarded your blog with comments 😂😂

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        1. Anisha says:

          I’m happy to have you here. It was super fun. 😁

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          1. Nima Mohan says:

            Same here too… to see someone digging up the old posts amd taking time to read and comment !! Love to you 💓

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            1. Anisha says:

              Reflecting all love! 💞

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              1. Nima Mohan says:

                😊😊😊😊💓💓💓💓

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