Beyond Victory

Success is not what it seems.

He wins her.
They live together.
They mutually split.

He wins the race.
He boasts and forgets values.
Arrogance becomes his armour.

He attains a dream job.
He forgets responsibilities.
Quality of his work performance deters.

He sets a fitness target.
He sincerely trains for a month.
He ignores practice when target is attained.

He gets elected.
False promises vanish into thin air.
His tenure ends.

He victoriously cheats.
Results are in his favour.
His guilt burden turns unbearable.

Isn’t success maintaining the hard-earned victory?


The quoted question at the end is in response to ‘The Saturday Six Word Story Prompt’ by Shweta of ‘My Random Ramblings’. The prompt for this week is ‘Success’.

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To know more about the prompt, go through the guidelines and the prompts & round-up posts, on her blog.

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36 Comments Add yours

  1. Peakspeak says:

    Awesome perspective put across so nicely✌🌼

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Anisha says:

      I’m delighted to know that you enjoyed this viewpoint of success. Thank you! 😊


  2. Era says:

    wow 👌👌

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you, Era! ❤


      1. Era says:

        Anytime 😊

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

    I love the last question and the answer, according to me is yes. It is. I love the poem too! Good job ❤️

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    1. Anisha says:

      It’s the same with me. 🤗

      Thanks for the compliment, Ramyani!


    1. Anisha says:

      I have the same view. Glad that you agree with my stance!

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Ishita Gupta says:

    I’m speechless. This was too good!❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Anisha says:

      I’m honoured. Thanks a million, Ishita! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  5. fahimay says:

    Amazingly poignant lines!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you very much!

      Liked by 1 person

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