Is it not time we kill those man-made social constructs like religion, race, caste, and class in which humans still hide their inexistent honour? Emphasizing this thought, this free verse is written with six words in each line, and a six-word story is quoted at the end.
Disparaging sanity of love, honour glows. The crushed dreams fuel its fire.
Right to live becomes a question, When honour kills the humane identity. When last breaths tear apart hearts, Emotions trample under sweat and blood. As souls soar higher and farther, Man-made social constructs define new-fashioned honour. Too late is way too late! Doesn't honour lie in honouring humanity?
Wow! Powerful
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Thanks a lot, Nawazish! (:
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This is so powerful!! Beautifully written!! Lovely take on the prompt❤
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Thank you very much, Ishita! I’m glad you liked this take. (:
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Wonderful…. That is seriously a fabulous take … Each line of the poetry had that 6wsp and it ended with a piece of 6 word line….and that too with a great message… You are talented.. Following you
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Thank you very much! I welcome your compliment. Thanks for the follow. Keep visiting! (:
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Very well said. Look at all those killings done in the name of honour. Only if we would pause and think of our own humanity !
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Thank you, Dreamcatcher! Of course, that’s pathetic. We can only change ourselves and hope for a better change around.
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Wow
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Thank you, Kim!
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Such a powerful message, Anisha. Beautifully written. Honour has been redefined to fit the manmade social constructs! Great take. Thanks for joining in 😊
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Thanks a lot, Shweta! I’m glad you liked the take. We can individually change and reinstate the actual definition of honour. (:
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Yes, true. You’re most welcome ☺️
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Stunning!
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Thank you, Ashmita!
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👏👏 so so well said. I hope future generations are able to look beyond these constructs and change things.
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Thank you, Moksha! I hope so too, that better days are not far. (:
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Powerful piece Anisha. I believe humanity is the only religion we should follow. Well written 💜
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Thank you, Mam! I totally agree. Humanity should be one’s highest moral.
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Very positive words.
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Thanks a lot, Mam!
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