expedition starts
as fluorescent flickers
fan fervent fire
fabricating fantasy
under the whispering stars
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In response to Colleen’s ‘Tanka Tuesday #236 – Expedition’.
Featured Image: Pinterest.
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Crazy Nerds 
How lovely! Anisha, the assonance of the letter “f” in your tanka make this poem sing. Well done! ❤
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Thanks so much, Mam! I’m happy that you liked the tanka. ❤
Also, I’ve long-forgotten the difference between alliteration and assonance. Your words helped me recall my memory. Thanks for that! ☺
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You’re welcome. ❤
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This is so beautifully expressed Anisha!❣️
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Thank you very much, Mam! ❤
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💖 Pleasure 💖 Anisha❣️
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Enchanting word choice
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I’m gald that you liked it. Thanks so much, Jude! 🙂
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Always such a pleasure to read you.
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