we become artists
remembering we forget
artistic life bits
drills desire to discover
lively elements of art
This tanka is written with a pivot element, meaning the first three lines can be read together, and so are the last three.
Artists, say, photographers or writers, begin their exploration in the world of art recognizing that we tend to forget the beautiful moments of life. In their desire to discover these artistic elements of life, they also discover the lively elements of art.
Credits & Footnote
Inspired by Colleen’s ‘Tanka Tuesday #231’.
Featured Image:
Photo by Nadine Shaabana on Unsplash.
This is an innovative Tanka. Stunning weaving.
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I’m glad you liked the tanka, Kritika. Thank you very much!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Very well crafted poem Anisha
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Thanks a lot for the compliment, Mam!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Fabulous! I love the realization that we need to learn to recognize the beauty in life! ❤
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Perfect interpretation, Mam! Indeed, that’s where the joy of life is, when we recognize its beauty in all circumstances, happy or sad. Thank you very much for appreciating! ❤
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Exactly! Well said! ❤️
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“Abstract detail art-drawings=from awesome-to-supreme
*&* poems and other genres are from ABCD-to-WXYZ
comprising 1-10-to-literary verb superb!”
_-Van Prince
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Loved the innovative style of writing the tanka Anisha!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Mam. Thank you. 🙂
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Innovative ✨🥂
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Thanks a lot, Simon! 🙂
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Beautiful writing❤️😊
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Thanks so much, Olivia! 🙂❤
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Beautifully written, Anisha. ❤️🤗
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Thanks a lot, Shweta! ❤
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You’re very welcome 😃
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Beautiful write dear Anisha but rather I would say brilliant 👏👏👏
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That’s a great compliment. Thanks a lot, Offshore Writer! ❤🤗
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Very creative and very beautiful! ♥♥
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Thanks a ton, Sonali! 🤗❤
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