Because I could not stop for death, He stopped before me Choosing the dark dock In a deep valley Amidst the lofty mountains And started pouring out his anguish By crying out tears Until the sun shone again!
The line “Because I could not stop for death” is the first line of a poem by Emily Dickinson. Here, I’ve used it to denote the inevitability of nature’s wrath.
The time of death’s arrival is an uncertain happening; So is the nature of natural disasters. In the above verse, the burst of rain clouds is personified as death, and the idea is inspired by the recent Yaas cyclone that hit India.
Too good ❤️
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Thank you very much! ❤
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Nature’s wrath is inevitable indeed, and is death. I loved how you blended all the elements so seamlessly. Beautifully written, Anisha. I loved your explanation too. Great take on the prompt.
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I’m glad our views are in accordance, Shweta. This is one poem that actually flowed seamlessly. I completed it in less than a minute. Thanks a lot for the compliment!
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Wow, less than a minute! That’s amazing, Anisha. Kudos to you. Keep up the great job.
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I wish it happens often. I was amazed too. Thanks again, Shweta!
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Here’s to hoping that it keeps happening. You’re always welcome, dear ❤️🙂
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❤🤗
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This is amazing read. I loved how brilliantly you have used the metaphors here to put forward your thoughts.
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Thank you, Puzzled Mind! Most often, I guess mind is refusing to get out of stereotypes. That’s what made me compare the darkness with death. I’m glad that you enjoyed this metaphor.
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Very moving poem. Thanks for including my image in this poem.
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I’m glad you feel so, Mam! Thanks a lot. ❤
I really loved this picture. I adore anything that goes with black. A wonderful pic leads to thoughtful words. I’m happy that you chose to share this click of yours.
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You’re welcome! It’s a pleasure.
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Very skilfully crafted!
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Thanks a lot for the compliment, Akshita!
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I read the first line and it reminded me of Emily Dickinson but the lines ahead changed the entire thing. I liked how you used dark clouds to denote death giving a very powerful message.
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I’m impressed that you identified her words right at the first line. Indeed, the theme is entirely different. Happy to know you enjoyed the message conveyed! Thank you, Rashmi.
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I love how you’ve incorporated the natural elements so seamlessly 🤩 Very well done, Anisha!
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I’ve to admit it flowed seamlessly too. Thank you very much, Priya! ❤
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A beautiful and powerful connect between the two, done so well Anisha ❤️
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I’m glad to know you could feel the connect expressed as metaphor. Thanks a lot, Mam! ❤
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Beautifully ended it positively. Love your take on the prompt Anisha. You started it with Emily’s poem which is a challenge and you completed it wonderfully.
However, death, for me, is certain. As its a cycle which the planet follows. The factor ‘Time’ is uncertain. Everyone perceives it differently.
Hope is in the strokes of light which enhance the beauty of dark.
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I often prefer to have light-hearted endings. I’m happy that you liked it too. It’s been long reading that poem, but I somehow recalled only the first line and lucky that the follow-up turned well too.
I just re-read my description part. I meant to say the time of death’s arrival is uncertain, and not that death is uncertain. I failed to express it clearly. I too believe in the certainty of death. Thank you for pointing it out. I’ll make the change soon.
I agree with your view on hope. I too conceive, only those who can see light through darkness believe in its beauty. For a few days now, I’ve been noticing a lot of commonalities in our thoughts. 🙂
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I have not read the poem but can guess it from the poets name to be amazing. Would read it now.
Great minds think alike. 🙂 😀
Though still a lot is left to see, consume, decipher and much more.
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😀
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