Solution

This is a free verse, each line framed with six words, comparing water with the life of anyone who is in trouble. Based on the mind’s perception, the hope for reality might evaporate or offer a solution. A six-word story is quoted at the end.

Amorphous, but still assigned a colour.
She closed the doors of perception.
Things known transformed into things unknown.
She got lost in the waves.

Lost in mid-ocean, she was clueless.
She opened the doors of perception.
Flowing brutality also felt quite serene.
She found herself in the waves.

Like rigorous flow surrenders to oceans,
Hopes often surrender to waiting worlds.
Water not only reflects the face.
It reflects the strength of heart.

Like water takes it's container's shape,
Life's seen the way mind pictures.
Turbulent waters and minds are contagious.
Only calm ones can perceive solutions.

Water can evaporate or offer solutions.


This is in response to ‘The Saturday Six Word Story Prompt’ by Shweta of ‘My Random Ramblings’. The prompt for this week is ‘Water’.

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To know more about the prompt, go through the guidelines and the prompts & round-up posts, on her blog.


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  1. I can only say one word ‘brilliant’

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thanks a lot, sir!

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  2. Love the lines! 💟 Well crafted!

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    1. Anisha says:

      Many thanks to you, Priya! ❤

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  3. Akriti Jain says:

    Very well written !!!

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thanks a lot! I’m happy that you liked it.

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  4. Well-written, Anisha. Beautifully composed. ❤ Cheryl

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thank you very much, Mam! ❤

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  5. Lovelyyy…!❤❤❤💕

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    1. Anisha says:

      Thanks a lot, Akshita! ❤☺

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      1. My great pleasure anisha🤗🤗

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  6. Ishita Gupta says:

    This is marvellous!

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    1. Anisha says:

      I very much appreciate your compliment, Ishita! ❣

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  7. Nima Mohan says:

    Your six words were always interesting. And now, it is more intriguing !!

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    1. Anisha says:

      I’m so glad you find it so, Nima. Thanks a bunch for your constant encouragement. 😃

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      1. Nima Mohan says:

        My absolute pleasure Anisha 🙂

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