few towering whips
trip upwards making a map
agin lowering skies
Here, whips denote slender, unbranched shoots, or plants. Agin is the dialect form of against. Lowering means dark and threatening, as if it’s about to rain.
This post is written in response to the ‘Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt’ by Ronovan. The challenge words for the week are Trip and Whip.
Quite brilliant!
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Thank you, Harsh!
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Well crafted! Well done Anisha 😊
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Thanks a lot, Happy Soul!
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So good 👌👌👌
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Thank you, Era!
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Anytime !
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Lovely..
different use of the prompt words . well done dear ❤
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Happy to know that you found it different, Nima. Thanks a lot! ❤
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Welcome Anisha dear ❤️
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Wow! Brilliantly penned ✨👌
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Thank you very much, Nathi! ☺❣
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You’re most welcome, Anisha😇
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Brilliant!!
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Thank you, Aashi!
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Well articulated Anisha! It made me learn some new words.
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Thank you, Rashmi! I’m glad to have introduced you to few new words.
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Great pic!
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Thank you!
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